good try for a newbie
It's a good start for someone new at flash...
the choice of music was great and really fit the mood, but sometimes the animation and choice of artwork contradicted the general mood.
also, I kept thinking the "funnies" didn't fit the atmosphere at all (i.e two kirbies or whatever sitting above the mountain in the train scene??), and I think a serious movie should remain a serious movie, however novice the artwork might be.
all in all it was a good try with a good sense of style.
one suggestion would be to maybe spend some more time on your next movie and polish the details a bit.