Ratatosk's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Welcome To Nutraville]

kewl effects

I like the graphical effects and the musical score included...
I like how everything flows and the cool splash effects.

...but as everyone else stated, it's just a display of graphical prowess (...i suppose...) and not much more...

give it more content, then give it another go.

[Holocaust Theme]

good try for a newbie

It's a good start for someone new at flash...

the choice of music was great and really fit the mood, but sometimes the animation and choice of artwork contradicted the general mood.

also, I kept thinking the "funnies" didn't fit the atmosphere at all (i.e two kirbies or whatever sitting above the mountain in the train scene??), and I think a serious movie should remain a serious movie, however novice the artwork might be.

all in all it was a good try with a good sense of style.
one suggestion would be to maybe spend some more time on your next movie and polish the details a bit.

[3D Vector Outlines]

Nice effects...

It's a cool effect you've got there.

Instead of just displaying a 2-second example of what effects you can do, put your effects to good use and make a one-minute animation or whatever using this technique.

Or.... you could make a tutorial out of this technique and show people how to do wire-frame 3D graphics, which would be totally awesome.